Lazerus
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Join date : 2008-05-09
Age : 38
Location : Montana
 | Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Let the training begin!  Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:12 pm | |
| (Hey could you do me a favor and REDO that post so it isn't a one-liner and remember you are opening the thread and it is your travel from Pewter to Pallet in this so have some fun with it dude and I think I did in fact reply to the one that you did put in there about you leaving dude! So could you PLEASE redo and make it longer use your reources Role-Play your guy think of how he walks, how he thinks, what's around him, ya know just like the same rules as if you where making a short story in english okay dude thanks) | |
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PhoeniX
Team Silver Spark Leader
Posts : 13
Join date : 2009-11-17
| | Subject: Chapter 4: Let the training begin! Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:55 am | |
| (OK this isn't my first forum rpg so i know how you do this but i don't really have much time on my bro's comp so i make them short but from now on i'll make them longer) Because Shane couldn't battle in the gym he went back to Pallet Town.He was walking trough a forest while talking to his Starly a little.They were almost at the exit of the forest when they suddenly heard a strange sound "What was that?....." "Star...." Suddenly a trainer jumped out of the bush it looked like he wanted to battle. (OK better now  )
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