New Pokemon trainer Alexandra Hales

Name: Alexandra Hales

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Description:She's:168cm(5'2)
Hair style and color: One long braide ,brown hair.
Eyes: Grey eyes.
Clothes: She wears a long shirt and a small jacket on top.got gloves and a bandana.

Hometown: Pallet town

History: She has lived in pallet town her whole life.Her father was a trainer and he raised an eevee.When she was 9 her father passed away over sickness and she took the eevee under her command.
Personality: She's very nicegoing. its easy for her to make friends, when people remind her of her father she gets all pissed and annoyed because its a sensetive matter.

Pokemon Team:Lv 34 EEvee(her father trained it before her, tell me if its ok or not that its his lvl)

You need to add a little more detail..and lvl 34 is a little much

Hello newcomer I have read your application and it seems good enough, but question have you read a bunch of books how they introduce a new character by their appearance? If so that is what we're looking for in the appearance everything else seems in order except that if you would be so kind to edit that then I'll take another look at it!
Lazerus
Co-Owner
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