new character

Subject: new character Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:57 pm

Name: steven loggans
Age: 15
Gender: male
Description: i am 15 years old. i am tall with blue eyes. I am 4"11
Hometown: pallet town
Personality: kind and respectful sometimes mad mood. i dont curse either.
Pokemon Team: Totodile

Subject: Re: new character Thu Feb 25, 2010 6:52 pm

(Sorry dude you need to make it longer than that hopefully you saw the instructions on the form and read the revised rules cause they both state not to have one liners as well as being descriptive in the app. and in posts *I think* So could you do me a favor adn put more input into your application and if it'll help look at other apps to see what others have done to see what you can do to make it better. As well as re-reading the instructions on the form and re-reading the revised rules! thanks and hope you revise your app to make it better and longer can't wait to see your modifications! )

» I'm a newbie and I'd like to create a character + team character please :) (Btw I have written quite a lot so its probs boring) :/
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