New Trainer

Name:Ian Tade
Age:16
Gender:Male
Homtown:Pallet Town
Discription:Black Fauxhawk with a white streak in the middle. 6ft. 3in. black eyes. Wears a custom Team Galactic suit made by his brother who was a grunt in the team. Has a scare across his neck.
History: He was born in Sinnoh. His Dad left his Mom at when he was 2 and his Mom committed suicide with all the stress. Left on the streets at 9. Had to leave sinnoh and go to Pallet Town. There he stayed with his abusive Uncle. Then at age 10 he went off and became a pokemon trainer. But when he went to Prof. Oak he got rid of his last pokemon. He went out side full of rage but he saw his uncle angry. Then Ian saw what looked to be absol with a scar on its eye. Ian suddenly relized it ws the same absol the night his mother committed suicide. Ian's uncle took him by the throat in the forest. There he beat Ian repeatedly. Then the absol leaped out and tackeled Ian's uncle. The uncle ran in fear. Ever sense then the absol walked with Ian everywhere he went.
Personality: Dark and silent.(due to his childhood) Gets angry easily and is very protective for the ones he loves
Team: Absol lvl.5

There is only one thing that you need to change or more like update you need to put more description into the appearance make it full sentences and try to do every single detail if you can or at least something more descriptive than what you have so far!
LAZERUS
Co-Owner

Name:Ian Tade
Age:16
Gender:Male
Homtown:Pallet Town
Discription:Ian has a black Fauxhawk with a white streak in the middle. He's 6ft. 3in with black eyes. Wears a custom Team Galactic suit. One of the suits pant legs is shorter than the other. Also, it has a hood, half black and half silver. The suit was made by his brother who was a grunt in the team. Has a scare across his neck caused by his uncle. Favors dark pokemon and powerful ones. Would like to join Team Galactic like his brother. Gets annoyed with cocky trainers and hates trainers who suck. Lastly, he can know how sombody feels just by looking in their eyes.
History: He was born in Haerthome city, Sinnoh. His Dad left his Mom at when he was 2 and his Mom committed suicide 7 years later with all the stress. Left on the streets at 9. He had to leave sinnoh and go to Pallet Town. There he stayed with his abusive Uncle. Then at age 10 he went off and became a pokemon trainer. But when he went to Prof. Oak he got rid of his last pokemon. He went out side full of rage but he saw his uncle angry. Then Ian saw what looked to be absol with a scar on its eye. Ian suddenly relized it ws the same absol the night his mother committed suicide. Ian's uncle took him by the throat in the forest. There he beat Ian repeatedly. Then the absol leaped out and tackeled Ian's uncle. Ian's uncle ran in fear. Ever sense then the absol walked with Ian everywhere he went, protecting him.
Personality: Dark and silent.(due to his childhood) Gets angry easily and is very protective for the ones he loves.
Team: Absol lvl.5

Ok, I made the discription more dicriptive. Also, I added mor things to it and his history.

The Professor welcomes you as you are....

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Species: #359 Absol
Lv. 6 Female HP: 65
Height: 3' 11" Weight: 104lbs.
Type: Dark Ability: Super Luck
Attack: Feint, Scratch, Leer

Nope, no nickname